Automobile Dealership Advertisements
on the Radio and how they are Counterproductive
On Dallas/Fort Worth area radio stations,
commercials for automobile dealerships are broadcast
frequently – often several times in one hour.
Some dealerships try to make their ads interesting
and therefore stand out, with mixed results. Sewell,
for example, utilizes a composed announcer who speaks
in an everyday, relaxed manner while avoiding any
low style elements in his diction. Barely audible
in the background is calm, subdued music (often a
soothing piano piece). On the other hand, Ewing attempts
to elicit laughs by having the owner act like a country
bumpkin who has just a sixth grade education. These
commercials involve Fen Ewing conversing with an authoritative
“voice of reason” who tries to figure
out what the owner is talking about. While one of
these commercials may be more persuasive and enjoyable
than the other, too many dealerships fail to be as
clever as either. Their type of commercial can be
recognized by three primary characteristics. The first
of these is a loud announcer. Apparently a car (and
especially truck) dealer is unable to sell one of
his vehicles without advertising it via a booming,
digitally-enhanced male voice. In addition, car commercials
generally have upbeat rock or techno music blaring
in the background – so loud that it competes
with the announcer for your attention. Looping every
ten seconds, this music screams “inexpensive.”
Finally, each ad features the typical hooks: “zero
percent financing,” “cash rebates,”
“zero down,” “hail damage discounts,”
etc. Because these characteristics appear together
so often, it may seem that they are the ideal combination
of persuasive appeals. But perhaps they are actually
the result of ignorance or laziness on the part of
the ad’s creators – the producers. Failing
to follow several important guidelines for an easily-consumed
message, these commercials are counterproductive.
While one part of them seeks to catch and hold the
attention of the listener, another part is driving
the listener away. If the dealers would recognize
this problem and make an effort to correct it, the
effectiveness of their commercials could be greatly
enhanced. With commercials that are easily absorbed,
the dealer would reach more listeners, draw more potential
customers to their showrooms, and ultimately sell
more cars.
Before analyzing the advertisements
themselves, it is important to determine at whom they
are chiefly aimed. Clearly, the target audience is
comprised of potential car-buyers who are waiting
for special incentives to draw them in for a test
drive. But not just any potential car-buyer is going
to be interested in these commercials. The upper-class,
more “sophisticated,” shopper would not
be swayed by such hooks listed above. Living comfortably
and well within their means, this class of buyer is
financially able to put money down for a car purchase
and take the shorter-term loan, if any loan at all.
“Zero money down” or “zero percent
financing” are not particularly compelling reasons
to investigate a dealer when loans are not an issue.
Additionally, the higher-income buyer would undoubtedly
be turned off by the loud, obnoxious narrator used
to proclaim these incentives and would likely take
the initiative to seek out a Lexus or BMW dealer that
maintains an aura of refinement (and which would not
resort to using low-budget radio ads to promote their
vehicles). On the other side of the spectrum are the
economically-focused buyers. A used Pontiac Grand
Am is the type of car on this person’s list.
These consumers probably pay little attention to the
advertisements of a new-car dealership because they
know they cannot afford anything beyond a several-year-old
vehicle with at least fifty-thousand miles. The minor
financial benefits of rebates and low financing costs
are not going to be sufficient to justify this class
of shopper upgrading from a used car to a new one.
The third, and probably largest, group of car-buyers
is comprised of the middle-class consumer. Living
in a fairly nice neighborhood and owning a two-story
house and multiple cars, this type of person may not
be a CEO but certainly lives comfortably. Members
of the middle-class might be unable to buy a car outright,
but have the income necessary to pay off a new one
over the course of a few years. They probably do not
enjoy the loud music or announcers in the typical
local car advertisement, but are not so sophisticated
that they would be terribly disgusted by it. Finally,
this group of potential buyers may indeed be willing
to make a snap purchase decision based on the previously
mentioned financial incentives. Thus, the middle-class
is the primary target of these ads, but how skillfully
are the advertisements catered to their tastes? The
objective of this paper is to show that while these
commercials do appeal more to the middle-class listener
than to either of the other groups, they are not necessarily
easily absorbed by anyone.
To explain the problems with the trite
and unimaginative type of car commercial, it is first
important to analyze the appeals it makes to the audience.
Logos, the logical and factual portion of an argument,
certainly plays a role. Attention to this is of utmost
importance for any advertisement – without logos,
an argument cannot be made. A customer cannot be expected
to be impressed by “really good deals,”
“long warranties” or “no payments
for a good while.” Specific, not vague, reasons
are necessary to attract shoppers. Thankfully, this
is not ignored in these ads – they do include
substantive justification for checking out the latest
sale. “$1000 off MSRP” is a factual reason
to investigate the deal, as are any of the other incentives
that are commonly touted: “no payments for a
year,” “100,000 mile power-train warranty,”
“discounted models from last year,” etc.
Additionally, some advertisements will explain that
“these low prices won’t be here for long”
and the listener should “check out the inventory
right away,” pointing out the fact that the
sales have a quickly-approaching deadline, and therefore
a visit to the dealer should not be delayed. While
their arguments may not be deep or profound, this
type of commercial does generally have a proper emphasis
on logos.
Although car dealerships tend to effectively
utilize logos in their ads, they frequently overdo
it when pathos is concerned. The announcer sounds
as though he is on caffeine pills, talking deeply
and dramatically. A high-testosterone electronic sound
effect, such as an explosion or boom, is triggered
whenever a recurring theme is mentioned and an upbeat,
repetitive and thumping soundtrack plays in the background.
These features may be intended to seem “cool”
and imply power and toughness. They also yield a commercial
that is hard to ignore – one that can convey
a sense of immediacy and the need to quickly visit
the dealership. Yet at the same time, the audience
may simply be turned off by its loudness, choosing
to turn down the volume instead of tune in their ears.
Therefore, the “high-octane” method of
selling cars (no pun intended) is in many ways a gamble.
On the one hand, the customer may be driven to promptly
check out the dealership (a win). On the other, this
listener may switch channels so fast that he never
even hears the whole commercial and thus misses the
great deals contained therein (a devastating loss).
Like alcohol, pathos can be good in moderation. Too
much of it, though, and there can be unintended consequences.
While car advertisements often have
an overemphasis on pathos, they tend to fall short
when it comes to ethos. The announcer sounds like
the same person featured in all the competitors’
ads and therefore one wonders what is so special about
this dealer when his ads are so generic. Additionally,
with heavily distorted guitar riffs blaring in the
background, the dealership comes across as run by
a bunch of twenty-somethings instead of responsible
adults. Loud, obnoxious sound effects used over and
over again along with a repeating theme such as the
announcer booming “super-saaaale” are
perfect examples of this. While the listener may be
willing to look past this style, it is doubtful that
anyone would be attracted by it. By portraying themselves
as childish and almost belligerently energized, dealerships
lend themselves an immature and possibly even repugnant
ethos. These car advertisements seem to ignore this
facet of an argument and instead focus on logos and
pathos – a mistake. A truly effective commercial
must have a proper emphasis on each of these three
aspects, otherwise it will be counterproductive. And
counterproductive is just what characterizes this
type of car advertisement – their message is
delivered in such a way that just hearing it is difficult.
Having discussed the ethos, logos, and
pathos of these advertisements, an understanding of
their actual arguments is also important in determining
why these commercials fail to reach their persuasive
potential. One clear message is that the listener
needs a new car. Obviously the entire advertisement
wants the audience to feel this way. A commercial
might say “you deserve a new car” or “buy
the car you’ve been waiting for” to make
the listener feel that such a purchase is not too
extravagant or unjustified. In order to convince the
consumer that now is the best time to buy, the producers
of the ad emphasize the temporary nature of the current
sales in order to encourage the customer to make a
spur-of-the-moment decision. They know that if the
customer feels rushed, he may not be as circumspect
about the purchase. If the buyer decides to go ahead,
ignoring his reasons to wait in light of the soon-to-expire
incentive, the argument has done its job.
Now the question must be asked: does
the audience consume or reject the car dealership’s
message? If they do consume the message, is it because
of these aspects or in spite of them? Clearly some
listeners are successfully informed about a promotion
and choose to explore the dealer as a result of hearing
its spot on the radio. People do investigate and take
advantage of sales, and dealers must have some reason
to continue investing in their commercials. However,
the method by which these commercials’ arguments
are delivered cannot but hurt their overall impression
on the audience. Many radio listeners, if not all,
regard this type of advertisement as terribly annoying.
It would seem that most would find themselves thinking
“wow, that is a good deal, but that sure was
a dumb commercial.” Dealerships appear to think
that how they deliver their message does not really
affect their acceptance. After all, people are just
looking for low prices, right? Yet if they would simply
recognize the importance of ethos and its potential
persuasive power, as well as see the danger in an
excessive emphasis on pathos, the dealership’s
advertisement could attract many more customers, some
of whom might even be a bit “classy.”
This concept has not gone completely
unheeded, but it seems that only luxury car dealers
have taken it seriously. For example, I personally
find Sewell’s commercials much easier to listen
to (and therefore consume) because they employ a calmer,
more mature-sounding announcer who is not a noise
pollutant. He gives a short, often witty, spiel about
how the dealership is committed to vehicle performance
and quality, mentions the financial incentives, and
then ends with the company trademark. Sewell’s
ads contain reasonably clever arguments and easily
digestible information – and they conclude before
becoming tiresome or redundant. But Sewell is a luxury
car dealer and is targeting a slightly different market
than the previously mentioned ads. The question must
then be: do only sellers of high-end vehicles, such
as a Mercedes-Bens or Cadillac, realize the problems
with annoying commercials? Is a good ethos only advantageous
when appealing to consumers in the market for expensive
vehicles? Certainly not: maturity, intelligence, friendliness
– these have a significant persuasive affect
on everyone, not just those with a high income. For
some reason, this concept appears to have been lost
on most auto dealers.
Most owners of dealerships also seem
to ignore the fact that the same people who hear their
commercials also hear ads for other products and services
– ads which at least make an effort to be humorous,
clever, or appealing. I for one actually smile and
enjoy listening to most Gieko Auto Insurance radio
advertisements because of their humor, and as a result
I have a relatively favorable opinion of the company.
For example, one Gieko commercial began with a man
calling into a phone help line. Upon the operator’s
inquiry, the man explains that he is having trouble
potty-training his son. Initially thinking that the
issue is rather minor, the operator asks of the child’s
age. The man replies, “twenty-six.” There
is a pause, and the operator says that he has bad
news and explains the obvious – it is nearly
impossible to potty-train someone that old. “But
I do have some good news,” he says before the
ad concludes, “I just saved a bunch of money
by switching to Gieko.” Yes, Gieko is a large
corporation with a significant advertising budget,
but this should not mean that humor, cleverness or
a good ethos can only be obtained at great financial
expense. A dealership on a budget could utilize the
concept of “quality over quantity” when
buying ads. Instead of running cheap and annoying
ones multiple times in an hour, they could spend a
little more money on the writer and producer, reducing
the frequency of the ad to balance out the cost. To
have one clever commercial every hour that the audience
finds appealing and interesting would be far more
effective than several annoying ones.
If the typical car ad is so impractical
and unattractive, why would any dealer opt for them?
Some dealers might use these ads because they have
always done so and they see little reason to change
their entire advertising strategy when business is
proceeding as usual. But to choose this course of
action is to be lazy – to settle for less than
what may be achieved with a little extra effort. Sales,
public opinion, reputation – all this could
be improved by a simple change in marketing strategy.
Other dealership owners may remain with these ads
out of fear that the expenses of changing them would
not be justified. This fear is not altogether without
merit, as the dealers Ewing and Jupiter have gone
to some effort to be “different” only
to end up with ads that are just as obnoxious as the
typical “loud announcer” ones, if not
more so. The owner of Jupiter Chevrolet’s son
might have been cute the first time he showed up in
the ads, but his blatantly scripted lines are getting
more inane every time. “Those are great deals,
dad, but lets make them even better!” “Alright,
son, how about two-thousand dollars off all 2003 trucks?”
These ads were made with good intentions, but in reality
failed to be engaging or enjoyable. This fate, however,
can be avoided if the dealer only utilizes some discretion
and wisdom – perhaps trying an idea out on honest
friends before making it into an ad would be a successful
strategy. Another explanation for the abundance of
uninspired car commercials could be that the owners
are merely unaware of what is necessary or beneficial
for persuasion. Disseminating information about a
sale involves more than simply shouting it out every
fifteen minutes. The manner in which it is announced
is also very important. The audience must be made
ready to accept a message – it cannot simply
be rammed down their throat. Humor, cleverness, wit
– these can be effective tools in catching one’s
attention and preparing them to absorb the message
that follows. Repetition of the same thing over and
over again in an obnoxious manner, however, will most
likely cause listeners to divert their attention or
turn down the volume – ultimately rendering
the advertisement a failure.
Regardless of the reason for having
such an unattractive advertisement, a car dealer could
increase the number of visitors to his dealership
and strengthen his sales figures if he would only
invest a little additional time and money into his
business’s marketing efforts. Owners of dealerships
must realize the ineffectiveness of their current
advertising strategy and recognize the financial benefits
that a well-written and interesting commercial could
bring. Until that happens, car commercials will continue
to be a constant annoyance to the vast majority of
radio listeners and will be at war with themselves.
Though the advertisement aims to attract listeners
with great deals, the manner in which this is done
only serves to discourage the audience, myself included,
from ever absorbing the message.